“Many of the most needless words are little ones that fill up sentences the way ‘um’ and ‘like’ and ‘you know’ fill up speech. They creep into writing when the author is afraid of sounding plain or unprofessional.” So says Christina Thompson, Editor, Harvard Review, Harvard College Library, writing in “Good Writing Matters – No Matter the Profession” on the Harvard Extension School website.

With this in mind, we continue our series on superfluous words with another 20 that you can do without!

 

Eliminate

it has long been known that 

Interestingly enough

 

Reduce

forecast future sales

make an attempt to   try to

 

Reduce to one word

complete stop

gentle breeze

already existing

broad spectrum

wide variety

diverse cross-section

full potential

place a burden on

 

Replace with one word

an adequate number of    enough

a lot of   many

an integral part (of)    part (of)

an overwhelming majority   most

arrive at an agreement    agree

in a nutshell    briefly

take into account   consider

with reference to the fact that    concerning



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